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Narcoleptic Insomniac by ~XxCrystalBallerxX:iconXxCrystalBallerxX:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Human Nature > Fixed


With every passing of an hour
I find the daylight lull me away
Taking me to my neurotic dream world
Where devils and angels play

With every coming of the night
I find myself wide awake
My mind too uncontrolled
Thoughts too unstable for you to take

I watch the sky fade
Into shades of morning gray
Whispering to the stars
As they disappear to welcome day

The sun is my companion
As I stare at it from my bed
My mind begins to slow
As my eyelids fall like lead

I wake to welcome sunset
So I can watch the orange haze
Letting my thoughts fill
As my eyes begin to glaze

With every passing of an hour
I find the daylight lull me away
Taking me to my neurotic dream world
Where devils and angels play
©2005-2009 ~XxCrystalBallerxX
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bet you never thought to see that as a title

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~rellaster Aug 28, 2005, 12:21:18 AM
Very nice poem. :)

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Keep the gun oiled and the temple clean.
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~XxCrystalBallerxX Aug 28, 2005, 7:59:28 AM
thanks :aww:

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angels had guitars before they had wings <3
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~ninjastompy Aug 28, 2005, 9:33:50 AM
haha laura is nocturnal
i didn't sleep either last night but it was cause it is bloody hot here
well i think you can t ake pills to help with insomnia
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~XxCrystalBallerxX Aug 28, 2005, 10:00:55 AM
i don't need to take medication for it. :p

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angels had guitars before they had wings <3
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~Kaltros Aug 28, 2005, 11:54:08 AM
hmm... that... doesn't quite make sense to me.. the title.. lol... how can you be a narcoleptic insomniac.. if your an insomniac, you don't fall asleep.. if your narcoleptic, you fall asleep randomly... so are you saying you'd just be sitting there like.. falling asleep for half a second then waking up, so you look like your trying to headbang or soemthing? "uh.. uh... uh... damn it.. uh.. uh..."

what a sight that would be...

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Ruling a country is like cooking a small fish.
--Lao Tzu
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~XxCrystalBallerxX Aug 28, 2005, 1:42:00 PM
lol . . . yeah it doesn't work at all heh and this morning i was trying to justify to my sister how it could work like being a daytime narcolpetic where you could be up and then all of a sudden feel tired and just pass out and then by night fall you just can't get to sleep
yeah i really have no idea how i thought of that one heh.

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angels had guitars before they had wings <3
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~ninjastompy Aug 28, 2005, 5:42:35 PM
i like it the meds were a joke i understand since that is true about you you never were awake in the morning but you keep posting blogs at midnight

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"CONSIDERING how likely we all are to be blown to pieces by it within the next five years, the atomic bomb has not roused so much discussion as might have been expected."

George orwell- You and the atomic bomb (1945)
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~XxCrystalBallerxX Aug 28, 2005, 8:14:40 PM
actually a little bit later than midnight hehe

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angels had guitars before they had wings <3
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~ninjastompy Aug 29, 2005, 1:33:03 PM
close enough

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"CONSIDERING how likely we all are to be blown to pieces by it within the next five years, the atomic bomb has not roused so much discussion as might have been expected."

George orwell- You and the atomic bomb (1945)
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